Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Fortune Cookie by Kyle

You Will Gain Peace At Last

These were the words written on a kid’s fortune cookie but it may as well have told his whole story. He was the age of 11 and was named rob but he’d gone through as much pain and frightful events as a veteran. Through the last year though his life had evened out he had been happy and free nothing could have been better until The Move. This had happened much too often and it always happened when life started to work, like always though. He was suddenly dumped in a new school new people new everything. He had gotten used to that feeling over the years but still hated every minute of it.

The first weeks in his new school were okay. I liked the school itself it was about the same size as his last but seemed a bit newer. Then for some reason when he thought he was finally fitting in. A group led by a kid named Freddy Sanchez suddenly decided he would be a fun target. The next month was horrible humiliation after humiliation. Rob even tried to take down the “gang” but at the end shutting up seemed the best answer. After staying quiet for a long time they moved on to a new target Grant. Now he wasn’t about to say Grant didn’t deserve some of it but it can be hard to take all of it without insulting a few people. That was probably the reason he stayed the target. But back to rob’s story now after that problem was fixed he couldn’t say it was perfect but it was better.

He started fitting in and made a good friend. They talked a lot and had fun. Once that happened a whole row of odd but not all bad things happened. He suddenly had fun and was free to do a lot more of what he wanted nothing was confusing or going on behind his back. But strangely enough The next day he walked in just like normal did his work and talked to some friends apparently and this is just what I was told but apparently rob started having problems again then just left to be a legend among kids. Me on the other hand now I’m just here to tell his story.

Planet Caravan by Black Sabbeth needed.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow Kyle!! your a great writer! The story is really interisting!!

:) greta and kate!! :)

Anonymous said...

TERRIFIC!!!!

Anonymous said...

that is a cool story



mystery man

Anonymous said...

oh yeah and if any of you get a chance listen to that song
-kyle

Anonymous said...

mystery man?
-kyle

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