You see a dog
He sees you
He looks nice
Bark bark bark
His tail is wagging
He runs after you
You run away
He shows his teeth
Now he looks mad
You look at him
He looks sad but you look mad
He sad
I see a big cut on his back
I could put him in a sack
But he is too fat
I take him back to my home
I get a leash
We take him to the vet
They give him stitches
We walk out of the vet
He yanks out of my hands
He is in the street
We see a speeding blue car
The dog does not see it
CRASH
The dog is dead
You have to love that dog.
Andrew
He sees you
He looks nice
Bark bark bark
His tail is wagging
He runs after you
You run away
He shows his teeth
Now he looks mad
You look at him
He looks sad but you look mad
He sad
I see a big cut on his back
I could put him in a sack
But he is too fat
I take him back to my home
I get a leash
We take him to the vet
They give him stitches
We walk out of the vet
He yanks out of my hands
He is in the street
We see a speeding blue car
The dog does not see it
CRASH
The dog is dead
You have to love that dog.
Andrew
(inspired by Love That Dog, by Sharon Creech)
6 comments:
Nice Job man
By: Saheel
That is very interesting but violent poem.
Graham
that is a very sad poem. really good
i love the picture of the dog it is so cute
i did not like that the dog died but it was really good
that is really sad! why did you make that?
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