Friday, May 11, 2007

Sophie and Sophia - Story

The American Revolutionary War:
From the eyes of Jack and Ginger, Bostonian pets

By: Sophia and Sophie

Prologue:

The shoreline was nearing. People were shouting, and so were the pets. “Yippee!” yowled Ginger, “We’re almost there.” Jack howled. “Be quiet you mutts!” the Captain shouted. Ginger said “I’m not a mutt, I’m a cat!” “And I’m a pure bred smooth fox terrier.” Jack’s British accent was smooth as his coat, while Ginger had a rough meow from her days in the alleyway before Jeanne found her. Can you guess where they are? They’re on a ship from Britain to the colonies. Finally the ship came to a stop. Ginger jumped into the arm’s of her owner, Jeanne’s arms. Eliza, Jack’s owner, scooped him up. “We’re here!” both the pets shouted in unison.

….To be continued check every one or two weeks for more!

9 comments:

Mr. C. said...

Great beginning and an even better idea for a story! I can't wait to read more....!

Anonymous said...

I like how you use your time wisley and I like how it is about the American Revolutionary War!Good job Sophie and Sophia!
-Carolyn R.

Anonymous said...

I love how you guys use VERY descriptive language, I can't wait to see how it turns out!

Christine M.

Anonymous said...

Keep writing! I want to know what happens.

Will

Anonymous said...

Sophie and Sophia-
What an excellent idea for a story! It's so cool that you took information we've been discussing in class and put it into an original story. The Revolutionary War has many interesting twists and turns-great subject matter.I cannot wait to read more-hop to it. ~Mrs. M

Anonymous said...

BRILLIANT! I LOVE IT! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART GUYS!
-LAUREN

Anonymous said...

This story is awesome.Can't wait to read more!
-Raquel

Anonymous said...

Sophia and Sophie I hope to read more when you write more for the story.

Cody

Anonymous said...

What will happen to their friendship during the Revolutionary War? - Eric M

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