Thursday, January 22, 2009

Kidnap by Erin

Once there was a lovely girl named Kate. Her hair was a golden brown and her eyes were a beautiful sky blue. She was perfect in every way. She was smart, pretty and most of all she cared about the world in every way possible. So one day she went to Kenya in Africa to visit the lions because they were her favorite animal. Ever since Kate visited Africa with her mom, who was an animal rescuer, and she had held a lion cub for the first time, she got hooked. That was ten years ago.

But now she is a rescue person like her mother. So that day she went to the center of Kenya because the lions always stop there. So as she was preparing to bring her four favorite lions, Simba – a boy lion that was the king of the pride, Nala- a girl lion that was sweet but also feisty, Kiara- Simba and Nala’s daughter, And Kovu Kiara’s best friend. To her place, a terrifying thing happened to her. A man who was a lion poacher needed to take some lions from Kenya back to New York for the whole zoo to see and the zoo’s favorite lion’s were the same ones as the ones Kate always brought back, and in order to bring the cubs back he needed to get them from Kate. So he took his black suburban and drove to where Kate and the lions were and came to her and said “You know I really like lions too And that’s is not fair you know” and when she was about to tell him the story about the lion saving that she did, he came closer to her and put her in a brown wool bag and put her in the back of his suburban and drove away.
To Be Continued…

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

That was a really great story! Was that supposed to be based on Kate in our class?

Kate said...

WOW Ilove your story I can't wait to see what happens to Kate next

Anonymous said...

That was AWESOME!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Great Story I can't wait to see what happens next! -Ria

Josie said...

Wow Erin that was great i can't wait to see what happens to Kate

Anonymous said...

that is sooo good! i cant wait to see what happens next to kate! GREAT STORY!

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